vader147

are you almost done?

Welcome to our forums, your application has been set on pending for the following reasons: 

- Your definitions aren't quite what we're looking for. If you look to our Wiki on the left side under "Helpful Links for Newer Players" you'll find links to view our explanations for both terms. Remember though to write them in your own words.

- With your character bio don't forget to include server lore, expanding upon your bio with additional personal events that have shaped your character also helps but try to avoid cliches such as "orcs killed my family". 

- Character Description is meant more to be what we see when we look at your character. How tall is he? What's his hair like? Body shape, etc.

- For Interesting Facts perhaps include things like a personality trait, flaw, or special skill.

At the bottom of your application, near where it shows your skin, you should see an Edit button. Please make the requested changes within 24 hours. 

If you have questions or would like assistance feel free to message myself or any Application Moderator. There's also plenty of people willing to offer aid or chat in our New Player Discord.

Sadly this application has been denied as not all the requested changes were met before the 24 hour period ran out: 

- Your definitions aren't quite what we're looking for. If you look to our Wiki on the left side under "Helpful Links for Newer Players" you'll find links to view our explanations for both terms. Remember though to write them in your own words.

- With your character bio don't forget to include server lore, expanding upon your bio with additional personal events that have shaped your character also helps but try to avoid cliches such as "orcs killed my family". 

- Character Description is meant more to be what we see when we look at your character. How tall is he? What's his hair like? Body shape, etc. While you did add his height and hair "A mysterious, dark, skilled ranger and assassin" isn't quite what we're looking for there as you can't actually tell those things by just glancing at someone.

- For Interesting Facts perhaps replace "Ranger and Assasin" with another personality trait.

Don't worry though! While this application has been denied you are able to post another 3 hours after my post here. 

If you have questions or would like assistance feel free to message myself or any Application Moderator. There's also plenty of people willing to offer aid or chat in our New Player Discord.