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VernonRoche


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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming means you act as if your character knows an information, while he normally can't have knowledge about it.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Forcing some states, like for example implying my character took control of 2 people, not giving the choice to the other players.
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Once Asurius, everything was lost that day, the day when Talonii Hollow was razed. Being a children from an eminent member of the Dark Trinity, Asurius had many privileges as a young elf, being granted special training in politics, music and combat, together with his brother Abadon. Most of the people living in the district saw them as twins, having only different hair color, although their characters were opposite just like the sun is to the moon. Asurius was a considerate person, being determined to ascend in the ranks of the Dark Trinity and making a radical change to the ills his people was living. He was the favourite student of Malofex, a high priest of the ancestors in his time, having enormous potential in influencing people with his arguments. On the other side, Abadon had the same ambitions as his twin brother, but in comparison to him, he viewed the dark elves as the supreme race, bred to lead the elven people and eradicating the human plague. He often traveled to Krugmar in order to learn the secrets of the orcs and how they fought, meeting there a dark elf. His name was Altyris, member of a cult called the Pale Eye. Abadon's boiling ambition soon led him to his downfall. Altyris shared his knowledge about the dark arts which would allow him one day to overthrow the Dark Trinity, and returned to Talonii Hollow, where he would stay with his brother. He told Asurius the adventures he lived, the people he met and what he learn from Altyris. Hearing those twisted words from his own brother the twins were divided for ever. At least that's what they thought. The Black Scrouge's attack was conducted with such force that the elves would try any means to stop this bloodshed. The brothers, fighting together with their father managed to fend off the attackers for some time but were soon overwhelmed. Fires burning high and corpses flooding the streets were what Abadon was watching, and among those dead elves, his brother lying on top of them, his arms turned into a grotesque bloody thing. His father was fighting among the last leading members of the Trinity when the final blow was announced. Losing all hope, he carried his brother's body among the amassment of destruction, reaching what was once their home, now a ruin of disaster. He repeated his dark mentor's last words, a curse that would forever follow him, the work of evil itself, "nagash". Suddenly, time seemed to stop. Abadon felt his brother falling from his hands, not being able to hold him. His hands were vanishing into a turmoil of shadows. His eyes were bleeding, his body entrangled by the dark powers he summoned. The only thing he remembered is watching his own body melt before his eyes and feinting. Days, hours, maybe weeks may have passed until he woke up. "Ah you have awaken. Asurius, am I right?", said the stranger. He couldn't answer such was the pain unbearable. "You are the one with the white hair right?", however Abadon's hair was black as coal. That moment he understood what he did and heard his brother's voice in his head, "It's alright, brother". 


Character Name: Abadon
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 280
Physical Description: A dark elf with some darker skin than usual, but looking burned, with pale eyes glittering when looked upon. He wears black robes, a hood and a mask.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Due to the fact that you haven't made an account on the forums yet,  which makes you unable to make any potential edits to your application as there were some missing points about it.

Please do make the following changes before you can make another application, you may re-apply as soon as possible:

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✦ Your character age doesn't seem to match the event of 
Talonii Hollow destruction. As it existed during the age of Aegis which lasted from 1305 to 1349.

 

✦ Your application was good but it was lore breaking at some other parts, such as mending your soul with another person simply from a curse alone. Consider changing this part or remove entirely from the application. 

 

✦ Lastly, your character cannot possess any magic of any sorts. That included being a necromancy as it takes time to learn and be taught in character. 

 

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I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091. You can always make a ticket in game as well simply by doing /atreq if you have any questions

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