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VesseloValhalla

VesseloValhalla

By VesseloValhalla

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: VesseloValhalla#3872
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: doing the most efficient known ways to play the game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: doing the fastest known ways to play the game
    Status: Denied

*puts hout his hand and shakes the mans hand*

"im here to start a new life for the one ive known was taken from me."

"i can do most skill trades"

"i can also fight in your army, if you so choose to have me"

"and i can drink my weight in ale"

*both laugh and they head to the pub to start a new friendship*

Character Name: VesseloValhalla
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 35
Physical Description: bearded dwarf full of wisdom and sorrow
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️ 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord crines#2975. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Suicidium to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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