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VisiKai
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: visikito
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: by just playing the game, ive loved roleplaying games, so i just need to know what the limits are to my acctions then i wont powergame, its fun to roleplay but if you act like you better than everyone its no fun anymore so i personaly just dont
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: because if you know what happened then, then you can try to interupt that and make it unfun for everyone, like if you were told on discord/voice chat, that there was gonna be a war, then youd know whats happening and it would be unfun
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Visikai Dawn
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 5,5h
long purple hair, elf ears,purple/black clothing/earling
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”





"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until… i came from an elf viilage in the woods, but it got burnt down by humans, and now i came into town for surport and help, i dislike humans, shy, i perfer not to talk to anyone

my name is Visikai Dawn, nice to meet you

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

→ Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

→ Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

→ Please provide more actions to your Roleplay Response.

 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @blake0205 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC  Discord as well.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

https://discord.gg/lotc

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.
 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is blake0205 If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @blake0205

you can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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