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VoicedMean294

VoicedMean294

By VoicedMean294

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Information that affects your role-playing
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Fully immersing yourself in the game world
    Status: Denied

Recognizing Khare, the City of Thieves, you pull your cowl closer and decide not to respond. The city has played with you before and you are wary of its inhabitants.

Character Name: VoicedMean294
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 36
Physical Description: Said to have no equal in single combat. Regardless of which weapon was being used, or even with no weapon, there was no man better.
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LotsOfMuffins

Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to plagiarism, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Character Biography is plagiarized from the source listed below. You may not copy any part of your application from anywhere else. This is strictly against the application rules, as your character must be 100% original. 
  • Your character cannot start off as famous or well-known. Please change this in your Character Biography. 
  • “VoicedMean294” is not an appropriate Character Name. 
  • Your Physical Description is plagiarized from the source listed below. As stated above, you may not copy any part of your application from anywhere else. 
  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. Yours doesn’t include anything about them physically, nor is it a description. 
  • “Khare” is not an existing location in Lord of the Craft lore. Please remove this from your Roleplay Scenario Response and take a look at our wiki for our lore. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are plagiarized from the source listed below. As stated above, you may not copy any part of your application from anywhere else. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
    Your     Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand.

Due to the above errors, you have been banned from applying until you contact me on the forums and we have a conversation about your application. 

 

For further help, I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/Edited  by LotsOfMuffins (see edit history)“

 

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