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    Discord: @seer_thearklover
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: By being descriptive with your actions and not making your fight forcefully kill somebody or injure somebody without their prior consent and to prevent this I would use a dice roll to ensure its fair and shows the effect of my action
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is an unfair disruptive advantage toward the RP because meta-ing is when you take something out of character or something you dont know about and bring it into the rp and just kno anyway witout giving reason or having a way that you'd find out
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Uria Sylver
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: (youll find the physical description in the scenario/backstory) For 2nd skin I'd use - Ill add it as a photo but will be similar to 1st skin
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”
 

I turned toward the old woman or what younger folk with bad demeanor called old hag "My story is something I may not share with not just anybody, even if your curiosity is out of lighthearted curiosity and kindness for it may not be believed by all.." He said as he turn toward her my cyan cloak swayed with my movement of turning toward the aged female the cloak the cloak being striped with emerald-ish cyan and a darker variant of the color and a white fluffy fur like outline of the cloak wearing a metallic armored suit of steel and other material not from Aevos with armored leather and parts all made to be together with connection points like joints like straps/or clips  keeping the armored clothing together being the same with my leggings wearing heavy metal armored boots. My back had a pair of sharp sickles sheathed for weapons hidden beneath his cloak and wearing a mask of cursed origin as it appears to be stuck to his body almost forcefully apart of his body the mask having able to have 2 holes for eyes to see through and a hole for me to eat or anything else one side of the mask being a dark grey the other a dark cyan-ish emerald color scheme the mask itself didn't seem to be enchanted or anything but it was his skin being white with cyan like hair being more emerald than cyan.

He removed the cloak as he begun to sweat a bit from just having it on for too long as he left the tent questions left to be answered as he went to his horse it was a generic brown horse with black footing fur and a black mane  and black tipped fur ears as he got up onto the horse he sat a top of the leather rough saddle as he took grip of the harnesses and rode off into the midnight leaving unanswered questions
(I'd prefer more of my characters backstory be learned over time or if somebody asks questions about the backstory, I'd answer the questions)

(Another thing I plan to add another skin along with the main one I'd use as if it were another clothing style and such and will might have different hair color)


 

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. Please fill in the physical description with this information.

 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No green hair.

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

 

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Changed Status to Pending

 

 

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. Please fill in the physical description with this information.

 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No green hair.

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

 

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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