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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: information acquired out-of-character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: carrying out of unrealistic, unfair, or godly actions
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario. I am here to find some friends. Maybe try to get some money, or experience some adventure. Why? Can I help you with something?

Character Name: Aria
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: tall, slim, blond long hair, blue eyes
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include your definition of roleplay!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description states that Aria is blond-haired and blue-eyed. These traits are not inherent to the Wood Elven, requiring you to be of mixed heritage (of two races). Please change it to adhere to the following information! Wood Elven Racial Lore 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. “Laziness” is a trait that can be applied to everybody, please try to think more thoroughly about it!

  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

  • Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's goal connects with their biography!

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear and background are expanded upon.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
    Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race, as Wood Elves cannot possess blue eyes (lest they share a mixed heritage, such as descending from two racial types), or blond hair. Please fix this accordingly!


 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Vi#3544 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message VictoriaMinaj to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the WIKI !

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