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Wicked Ironheart

By Wicked Ironheart

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: pǝʞɔıM#2001
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it is a fun way to connect with other people in a different world
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it is another fun way to connect with others
    Status: Denied

my parents were killed by orcs during a raid on the village we lived in. my parents put me in a secrets compartment in the floor to keep me safe i was 6 at the time after hours pasted a knight found me a took me under his wing. he trained me from the age 6 to 22. with my training and experience with the knights i will hunt and kill the orcs who killed my parents.

Character Name: Wicked IronHeart
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: 6'1 Brown hair Brown eyes strong and looks ready to fight
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

i will start by asking about the nearest outpost of knights. to ask for any info on a orc that was involved in  the murder of my parents. then ask him “are there any inns near by with rooms available”.  i would then give him a gold coin for the info he gave me and wish him the best

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Your application has been denied as a permanent player because there were too many errors.

 

Feel free to re-apply at any time. Please also ensure to utilise the critique listed below.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️ 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography includes references to things against our server rules. You cannot have common character tropes such as your parents being killed by orcs in your biography. Please review the server rules and reapply at any time. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.  


If you are in need of any assistance or would like to further discuss your denial, feel free to contact me on discord at red.#7752. You are also welcome to join the Official Discord and ask for help from other members of my team.

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