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Wiet

By Wiet

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: teunhaak#8593
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is when a player uses his own real-world knowledge in-game while his character does not have this knowledge which breaks immersion.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when you use unrealistic emotes in the roleplaying game which breaks the freedom of the players or the immersion.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

Bob looked annoyed at the well-dressed man. "Well you see" said Bob. "I am currently traveling to new Providence city because I have nothing else to do and a friend invited me. And for aspirations... I don’t really have any as you put it, 'aspirations' I am dirt poor which means that I have no money which means no food. So when I heard ,job in big city, I came. So the only aspiration I have is that I hope to find a job preferably as a shoe-maker. So good day and I hope to never see you again. Bob walks annoyed away.

Character Name: Bob Bobson
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 42
Physical Description: Bob Bobson is median height a bit Fat and has a pale skin tone. He has short black-brown hair and brown eyes.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

→Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

→Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

→Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action. 

→ Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

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After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord madythenothacked#1187. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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