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WinterCH

Winter Chris

By Winter Chris

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: WinterCH#9819
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using information i gathered threw a different source in game
    Example i learn about magic from the wiki and i try to use it in game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: not giving the chance for someone to act/fight back goin off on your own like you are unstoppable
    Status: Denied

Winter Looks at the man takes a step closer towards him and responds "I am adventuring the world in search of strength would you happen to know of anywhere I could acquire that"

Character Name: Winter Chris
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 5,8 height,150lbs
black hair color and grey eyes
shorter and skinnier then the average Highlander but build fairly well
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your biography is one large run on sentence! Please correct this!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • https://app.grammarly.com/

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!
  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

     

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Lickspittle#3413]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Lickspittle to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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