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Worrior
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Not trusting others?
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: That's when you become pugnacious and start beating up people to get more money!
    Status: Denied

I came here, to start a new life! I have nothing left from my old home because it was burned down from some nasty bandits! Now I must go on and live my life hoping to find them and eliminate them so I can live peacefully again.  In the mean time I want to make new friends and help those in need so hopefully I can find clues to find theses bandits. Plus it feels good helping other people! That's why I decided to come here to start a new adventure and end a previous one.


Character Name: Worrior
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: She is thick, brown, and beautiful! Also she's healthy and somewhat fit. Her hair is blue, she's 5ft 1/2 and weighs 156lbs
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that Worrior's village was burnt down by bandits, resulting in the death of her parents. Bandits killing your character's parents is a character trope, you must change that.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario must be written in third person, contain atleast one action and atleast one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ JokerLow#6666]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message JokerLow to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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