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WPM_BOSS

WPM_BOSS

By WPM_BOSS

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftforum.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: If the player Ailan113 is in a nation discord, and received a PM from one of his friends to get online because "there are raiders in the city", and then Ailan113 got online and ran halfway across the map to help defend his friends, he would be Metagaming because his character wouldn't know the city was being raided, as his character wasn't informed, the player controlling the character was.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: If the player Ailan113 emoted: "John swings his sword, cutting off Richard's head instantly." Ailan113 would be Powergaming, because he forced his emote, an instant kill emote, on the character Richard. A proper emote would be: "John swings his sword, attempting to slice at Richard's neck."
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

he would respond:To be the greates wizzard alive!!

Character Name: WPM_BOSS
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Strong,fast,agile,and have stong magic slim puple eye black hair and tall
Screenshot of Skin:
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions seems to have been written by somebody else?

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography states your character's mother was a queen, this is not allowed.
  • Your Roleplay Definition is incorrect.
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.
  • Your Physical Description states your character has "strong magic". This is not allowed and must be learned through roleplay on the server.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.
  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action.
  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!
  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.
  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [gavyn#4574]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message __Gavyn to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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