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WrennBuilder
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Wrenn#0446
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Play fair and balance my own character, now interrupting others actively in role play and notify mods s someone is power gaming
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it ruins imersitivity and playability, as well as storyline
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”
 

"I am Faye." He responds. No tremble in his hands, no unease whatsoever. "And you?"  The Hag only turns to face him, and whispers, 

"I am all who cannot see, the one untold by man, I am Eris, betrayer of Dreams..." Here Hark sees what he didn't notice before, a selection of blades, hammers and ax's all lined up, on a rack by the cooking pot.

"Who do you mean harm to? I'd rather not face another foe today." He removes his helmet, to reveal a gaping wound covered in blood over his eye. Eris simply beckons over to him, and says

"Allow me to hone my skills further, help you?" He walks over, but as he comes within arms reach, he feels a blade between his ribs. In instinct, he draws the blade on his hip, and years of knight Training come to mind. Years of service as a Captain, all the Allies he made. In one swing, the Hags head falls to the floor, along with the arm he held the blade. He looks down at her only to realise its looking hack at him. "You've made a grave mistake fool. I will be where you are unguarded, and you will Fall, Captain Hark of Velen." He simply turns and leaves.


Character Name: Faye Hark
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 35
Physical Description: Lean, but not shredded, he has a scar over his left eye and traditional armour of Xodian, his homeland. He had purple/red eyes and white skin.
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Please make the following changes in the next 48 hours:

  • Please expand on your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions to show that you understand each of them. Try to mention how you will avoid doing them on accident.
  • Unfortunately there is no location known as Xodian in LotC's history. Please update your description to reflect this.
  • You cannot start your character with years worth of experience as a knight or captain of guards as such must be accomplished through roleplay once you join the server. Please alter your roleplay backstory to reflect this.

 

If you need help making the changes, here are some sources:

 

If you have any specific questions, please feel free to message me on discord:

Orlanth#3080

If you need general help,  you can join the LotC Discord here:

 https://discord.gg/lotc

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki:

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

For additional help, here is a link to the new player hub:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/212839-new-player-hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please expand on your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions to show that you understand each of them. Try to mention how you will avoid doing them on accident.
  • Unfortunately there is no location known as Xodian in LotC's history. Please update your description to reflect this.
  • You cannot start your character with years worth of experience as a knight or captain of guards as such must be accomplished through roleplay once you join the server. Please alter your roleplay backstory to reflect this.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

If you have any specific questions, please feel free to message me on discord:

Orlanth#3080

If you need general help,  you can join the LotC Discord here:

 https://discord.gg/lotc

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki:

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

For additional help, here is a link to the new player hub:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/212839-new-player-hub

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