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WRIahmed
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: wriahmed
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Avoid powergaming by respecting other players’ choices and not forcing outcomes.
    Keep your character balanced with strengths and weaknesses.
    Focus on collaborative storytelling instead of trying to “win.”
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming breaks immersion by using player knowledge instead of character knowledge.
    It gives unfair advantages and ruins balanced storytelling
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Edward Stone
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: He is about 5’10” tall and weighs around 170 lbs.
He has white hair and black eyes.
He wears plain chainmail with a steel breastplate.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


The human steps carefully into the candlelit tent, his boots sinking slightly into the damp ground. He lowers himself onto the cushion, his black eyes fixed on the hag. “I come from the northern highlands,” he begins, his voice steady. “My childhood was harsh, shaped by cold winters and endless training with my father, a stern soldier who believed strength was the only path to survival.” He pauses, his hand brushing the hilt of his sword. “My mother was gentler, teaching me patience and honor, though she passed when I was young.” He leans forward, the flickering candlelight casting shadows across his face. “I have wandered far since then, seeking answers and purpose, and now I find myself here, in this town you claim has been waiting for me.”
The human straightens his posture, the flickering candlelight reflecting off his steel breastplate. “My path has been marked by battles and loss,” he says, voice low but firm. “I carry the weight of my father’s lessons and my mother’s memory with me always.” He glances around the tent, the smell of moss and rot heavy in the air. “My story is not yet finished, and perhaps you hold the key to its next chapter.

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

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