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✿You’re On the right track! Just a few things you need to change!

✿ Your Powergaming definition is not up to LOTC standards; please read over our wiki --->Here with our definitions. 

✿ Your Metagaming definition is not up to LOTC standards; please read over our wiki --->Here with our definitions.

✿Your Character Biography must be at least TEN sentences long, and please remember to use correct grammar! Your biography also must include at least ONE lore references Use our WIKI for some help! 

✿Your Physical description These must be complete sentences and not a list of traits. Describe what they look like. 
✿Your Personality Traits/Quirks are not quite there, and you can describe your characters personality, likes, dislikes, faith, opinions and philosophies. This must include at least one significant negative personality trait. These must be complete sentences and not a list of traits.

✿  That's an excellent start to your Roleplay scenario! I would suggest adding an action with * on either side*.  So for my example : *Smiles wide, in a jittery sense “Oh! Oh! Im looking for some shinies to add to my collection for my grandfather!”

You only have 24 Hours to make the requested changes before this application is denied. You do not need to post a new application to make these fixes, you can simply edit this current application. If you have any questions about how to make these corrections, please contact me on Discord. Discord:Tigergiri#0744  Im always happy to help!

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join ourr New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.