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Thymas
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: alphaaeu#5798
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Talking with stuff you know out of game in game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Doing unrealistic action
    Status: Denied

 

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Character Name: Thymas
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: All black robes, black eyes no pupil, black hair long, muscular, 6"3, 86kg, long arms and hooded
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 


Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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