Hi! As you can see, your application has been put on pending, so you're almost ready! There are just a few changes you need to make, but don't worry- you're doing great! 

• Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

• Your Character Biography states that your character's name is "Beach Chair". This is not a lore-appropriate name.

• Your Character Biography mentions a war taking place during his early life (it is unclear whether this is referring to Sutica or Haense). Neither of these two nations has been involved with any kind of war for some time. Smaller actions, such as skirmishes with bandit groups, or monster attacks, are events that could have realistically occurred. 

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is in the first-person. Please make sure to keep it in the third person, similar to how you would be emoting on-server.

• The two sections regarding what your character likes/dislikes about himself need to be fleshed out and expanded more. You need to write a minimum of two sentences in these sections.

• Your Character Biography states that your character was born on "March 1st". This doesn't match the server's roleplay calendar, which can be found here.

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • https://app.grammarly.com/

You will be given 24 hours to correct the needed changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me! 

Whenever you are done or have any questions, feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ Nectorist#8102 ], in-game with /message Nectorist to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or CT members can help you that way!

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

If you still need help, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki!

 WIKI

Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied. Please check below for the detailed reasons why. 

• Unfortunately, your 24 hour editing period has expired... However, don't fret! You are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change everything that is listed! 

You can submit a new application and try again right after, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below! 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ Nectorist#8102 ], in-game with /message Nectorist to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki!

 WIKI