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    Discord: xBucks1 #5208
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Meta gaming is when you get information that your charactar wouldnt know but used it as an advantage in game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power gaming is when you do something unrealistic that your character wouldn't be able to do such as instakill
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

Hello good sir how are you doing? im here looking for a place where i can widen my knowledge of magic. Is there such a place in this city? ahh yes thank you good sir, may you have a good day

Character Name: Hafrolir Kaltskinn
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: A fit dwarf not too powerful in strength. eyes are a dark. Golden long hair and a golden beard. 60 Kg in weight. 150 cm in height.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

 → Your metagaming definition is correct, however you need an example.

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Mountain_Dwarves 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Grand_Kingdom_of_Urguan 

→ Your character's weight does not reflect the weight range of Mountain Dwarves.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Mountain_Dwarves

→ Your character’s eye colour can not be green as Mountain Dwarves don’t have that eye colour.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Mountain_Dwarves 

→ The part regarding your biggest fear of losing your brother due to your family being murdered by thieves doesn’t line up with your character’s bio about your parents dying in a fire. 

→ For what your character likes about themselves, it must contain two things they like about themselves and be at least two sentences. 

→ For what your character dislikes about themselves, it must contain two things they dislike about themselves and be at least two sentences. 

→ For your roleplay scenario, please use quotes and have at least one emote.

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Mountain_Dwarves 

→ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.

https://app.grammarly.com/ 

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @HogoBojo#0001, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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