Xena334

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

For the following reason(s):
 

Ø  Your definitions are both wrong. Below is a link explaining both of these terms, please use that information to provide me with new, rewritten explanation. Also make sure you provide me with an example for each.

• Metagaming & powergaming

Ø  Your biography, although certainly interesting is too short, and does not contain any server lore. Please make sure you make your biography (much) longer than it is currently. I’m looking for a decently-sized paragraph. Make sure everything flows into eachother well, and that two references to the server lore are properly implemented in there. Below are various links to different lore pages, but please do not limit yourself to only these sources of server lore (visit other pages on the wiki too).

• The current in-game year is 1719.
• Arcas, the realm we currently play on. The migration from Atlas to Arcas took place in 1705.
• Atlas, the previous realm we played on.
• Human lore

Ø  Your interesting facts are bit too positive, and I want one of the positive facts to be reduced to a more neutral one (one that does not really give your character an advantage over others, nor a disadvantage).

Ø  You do not have to change your skin, but I do want to make a quick note. Having an armoured skin is completely fine, and extremely common but I also highly recommend having a version of your skin without the helmet, showing your character’s face. Guards in cities may ask you to take off your helmet, so it is very useful you can do so with a skin change!

You have 24 hours to make the requested changes. If you have any questions do not hesitate to contact me using the contact information below.

You can join our New Player Discord– Where you can ask questions to our Community Team, and meet other server players.

Be sure to read through the new player guide for more information on various rules, terms and the server itself!

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Rave_Cave_Marb#6279) or by /msg (marb121) in-game for any questions or concerns.

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

For the following reason(s):

Ø  Your biography is great, but its timeline does not match up yet! The timegap between 1556 and 1719 is too large, and your character couldn’t have “warped” between these time periods while on his ship. Please make sure you fix this!

Ø  Please add an example to your metagaming definition!

You have 24 hours to make the requested changes. If you have any questions do not hesitate to contact me using the contact information below.

You can join our New Player Discord– Where you can ask questions to our Community Team, and meet other server players.

Be sure to read through the new player guide for more information on various rules, terms and the server itself!

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Rave_Cave_Marb#6279) or by /msg (marb121) in-game for any questions or concerns.

if I reference 1556 how do I get to 1719?

also kinda made him really old lol

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

For the following reason(s):

Ø  The average lifespan of a Human is 150 years, so making him 183 is a little bit too old!

Ø  What I recommend, is keeping the first part of your biography but changing it to another city from a later map. Since your character is a Human, I recommend one of the Human nations found on the previous map Atlas, listed below!

• Carolustadt, the capital of Renatus.
• Cyrilsburg, the capital of Curon.
• Markev, the capital of Haense.
• Belvitz, the capital of Adria

These were the main Human cities on the last map, so I believe it is best to change the first part of your biography to be in one of these cities, so that you can make everything line up with your timeline.

You have 24 hours to make the requested changes. If you have any questions do not hesitate to contact me using the contact information below.

You can join our New Player Discord– Where you can ask questions to our Community Team, and meet other server players.

Be sure to read through the new player guide for more information on various rules, terms and the server itself!

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Rave_Cave_Marb#6279) or by /msg (marb121) in-game for any questions or concerns.

Your application has been

The 24 hours is up, however you may reapply immediately.

You may reapply immediately, but please take some time to fix all of the requested changes.
 

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Rave_Cave_Marb#6279), my forum account, or on the server (marb121).

You are also encouraged to join our New Player discord, a great place in which you can ask questions toward our staff, and mix with the general LOTC community.