Xian_XianCJ

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Definition of Roleplay is incorrect. Please make sure to include a proper Definition of Roleplay in your application. This can be found on our very own Wiki! Feel free to let me know if you need help!  

• https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide

• Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

• Your Character Biography states that your character has “powers.” If this is magic, please remember that your character cannot have any knowledge of magic in the world.

• Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks cannot have reference to magic or claim your character is a god!

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

• Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

• Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue. Please be sure to add one!

• Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

• Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • https://app.grammarly.com/ 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Kingo#1523]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message KingoArcher to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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