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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is where you're are figuring out how to solve the problem your role-play character is having without thinking it through in the situation,for example if a character cannot solve the problem given to them then the player may not get outside help
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is where a player tries to control another player's actions and make them do something they do not want to do.
    Status: Denied

Once there was a child named Conner Mcgonagle who lived in Asulon,on the day of his birth his mind and soul was teleported to where Iblees was being held captive,for Iblees was afraid of the child for he saw that he would become a powerful hero,and the one that just MIGHT bring his demise,so instead he went to corrupt the child while he was still with no intentions,however Aeriel saw great things in the boy's future aswel so he went to bring him back to his world before the corruption,however it was too later the child experienced dark magic,yet his soul rebelled it wanted a better life then this,so it tried it hardest and with the help of Aeriel he was able to escape,sadly the child was not free of the dark magic he was inflicted with,from that day on the child heard whispers,telling him to do the worst of things,yet the experience had its upside for the dark energy showed him a part of his soul that was....less corporeal,for the energy showed him the ways of a spirit,sadly the parents knew that people would surely kill their son if they saw him for what he was,so they hid his identity from the world,luckily he was not fully matured so they could hide it easily,but one day his village was attacked and his parents hid him in the floorboards while they tried to stop them....they died that night,and from that day forward Conner was no longer bound to living in only Asulon for his childhood like his parents thought,he went from new location to new location,Aegis,Anthos,Atlas,he was everywhere,and with anxiety,fear,and anger pushing him t every step he still found things to smile about...he still had joy in his heart,however the whole time he heard the voice,and it got louder and louder and LOUDER..but his good side always perveiled,then one day he went to face a Hero's journey,and the hard part to this quest...had just begun now he with is spirit self being matured he wore a hood to hide his true self for he did not want the people to kill him for the monster he was,now he is the masked hero,fighting monsters and stoping village raids like the one he suffered from,then he will battle his greatest enemy....the voice. p.s i left notes in the secret thing

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Note:if the spirit thing is STILL denied then i will edit and remove it ALSO this is a updated version of my original one as I could not update it and it was then made to also fit the lore

Note:He dose not get any sort of spectral abilities until a moment in the game (perhaps where he is throw off a cliff by a gang if this game has gangs and lives with a half heat witch can evolve (but it doesn't have to) into slow falling,but no flight ever,and this part REALLY doesn't have to be an ability of his,but it is mind control resistance which CAN (doesn't have to) evil and get better,but no mind control from him..

 

Character Name: Conner Mcgonagle
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Tall (6'5),untamed hair,childish smile,and frightened yet joyful eyes,part spirit face part dark elf,usually masked.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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For the following reasons

Your definition of metagaming is wrong please refer to the wiki linked below for the correct definition 

 

your backstory cannot include any magics, this includes spiritual magics and teleporting

 

ghosts , undead and such would require a creature application once already whitelisted 

 

your backstory needs a rewrite. 

 


 

If any of the reasons above involve the wiki here is the link wiki , this link will take you to the homepage.On here you will find all the server lore as well as the descriptions of powergaming and metagaming.

 

Your application being placed on pending means it was good, although there is still some issues, that need a little editing.From now you will have 24 hours to edit, once changes have been made please contact me either on the server via /msg Punisher8817 or on Discord Pun#6347. I will be happy to answer any questions you may have.

 

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Your definition of metagaming is wrong please refer to the wiki linked below for the correct definition 

 

your backstory cannot include any magics, this includes spiritual magics and teleporting

 

ghosts , undead and such would require a creature application once already whitelisted 

 

your backstory needs a rewrite. 


 

 

 

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is our wiki link, wiki homepage  , here you will find our lore as well as other useful information such as the meaning for metagaming and powergaming.

 

If you have any questions please feel free to msg me here on the forums , on discord Pun#6347 or in game with /msg Punisher8817.

 

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