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Leonardo69
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    Discord: leonardo69
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Well, I usually avoid powergaming through giving myself character flaws, avoiding "I'm the most special" backstory and abilities, I create realistic limitations to myself.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: So, metagaming affects roleplay through unfair advantages because it can rob people of suspense, organic roleplay, can destroy good storytelling.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Leonardo Sirius
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 29
Physical Description: 185 cm, white man with green eyes, brown hair with a cloak and with a big purple trinket on him, the cloak is white and it lays above his blue robe.
Roleplay Scenario:

The man steps inside, ducking slightly even though the tent is tall enough for him. His green eyes adjust slowly to the candlelight, flickering with something that might be recognition—or might be the reflection of the flames themselves. He settles onto the cushion with the careful, deliberate movements of someone who has learned to navigate spaces that aren't quite real. "Expected me?" His voice carries a faint accent, softened by years of travel. He tilts his head, listening to something only he can hear for a moment before continuing. "That's... convenient. I was beginning to think the mountains had swallowed my sense of direction entirely." He runs a hand through his brown hair "Luna used to say I'd forget my own name if it wasn't written on my heart." He presses his palms against his knees, steadying himself. "Leonardo. Leonardo Sirius." He glances toward the tent entrance, where shadows seem to shift though nothing enters. "I came from the mountains. Needed to clear my head after... well. After. An old friend has a cabin up there. We sat by the fire for three days without speaking. Best conversation we ever had." A pause. His eyes track something invisible crawling along the tent wall. "He gave me a compass before I left. Said the lowlands would swallow me if I wasn't careful. I think I lost it somewhere in the marsh." Leonardo returns his gaze to the hag, and for a moment his focus sharpens—clear, present, entirely human. "But you knew that already, didn't you? You said you've been expecting me."

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Hey there, As you can see your application has been Denied. Do not worry, you are free to reapply immediately, just ensure you make the changes listed below!

 


  1. Avoid using AI to write your backstory.
    1. The use of em-dash (—) whilst not uncommon for someone who understands punctuation is typically an AI trait, there was just one problem. Half your backstory is punctually incorrect, therefore your use of the em-dash pushes me to believe you wrote this with AI and modified it.
       

 


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