XMedival

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

For the following reasons,

• Your Metagaming & Powergaming definitions are not quite right I suggest you use an example to show you understand the concepts and that your definition is right.
  • Metagaming & Powergaming
• Your biography should be written as a paragraph, I suggest including at least 2 more lore reference and at least 10 complete sentences. (I’ll include a list of wiki pages you can use) We are currently living in Arcas please make sure you check out our Calendar, to understand the timeline better. What you’ve written so far is that you’ve taken a sword from a stone, if you are planning on referencing the Sword in the Stone tale to say you are a king that is not allowed so please come with a story of your own.
  • Human Wiki
  • Human Empire
  • Human Religion
  • Helena Settlement Guide
  • Curon Settlement Guide
  • Ves Settlement Guide
  • Haense Settlement Guide
  • Settlement Guides
  • Creatures
  • Flora
  • Arcas
• Your character’s name is not appropriate for the fantasy setting. Try a more human name.
• Your description is too short. Please use this space to describe what your character looks like, what color are his hair, his eyes, if they have any facial features, how they are built, anything that makes him unique (Purely physical description)
• Your traits/quirks should be complete sentences and follow the following format.
  • At least one positive trait: (Strength, skill, achievement)
  • At least one neutral trait: (Hobby, lesser skill, interesting fact)
  • At least one negative trait: (Weakness, Fear, Flaw)
• You didn’t answer the roleplay scenario, I invite you to come up with a creative answer to the situation provided. 

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

Your time limit has expired. Whenever you make a new application remember to take into account my previous comments.

On 10/17/2019 at 9:14 AM, SoulReapingWolf said:

• Your Metagaming & Powergaming definitions are not quite right I suggest you use an example to show you understand the concepts and that your definition is right.
  • Metagaming & Powergaming
• Your biography should be written as a paragraph, I suggest including at least 2 more lore reference and at least 10 complete sentences. (I’ll include a list of wiki pages you can use) We are currently living in Arcas please make sure you check out our Calendar, to understand the timeline better. What you’ve written so far is that you’ve taken a sword from a stone, if you are planning on referencing the Sword in the Stone tale to say you are a king that is not allowed so please come with a story of your own.
  • Human Wiki
  • Human Empire
  • Human Religion
  • Helena Settlement Guide
  • Curon Settlement Guide
  • Ves Settlement Guide
  • Haense Settlement Guide
  • Settlement Guides
  • Creatures
  • Flora
  • Arcas
• Your character’s name is not appropriate for the fantasy setting. Try a more human name.
• Your description is too short. Please use this space to describe what your character looks like, what color are his hair, his eyes, if they have any facial features, how they are built, anything that makes him unique (Purely physical description)
• Your traits/quirks should be complete sentences and follow the following format.
  • At least one positive trait: (Strength, skill, achievement)
  • At least one neutral trait: (Hobby, lesser skill, interesting fact)
  • At least one negative trait: (Weakness, Fear, Flaw)
• You didn’t answer the roleplay scenario, I invite you to come up with a creative answer to the situation provided. 

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application. 

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.