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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: syd#5656
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: it is a term that is used in role playing games, that describes the players real life knowledge, basically breaking character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it is a style of interacting with games or game like systems
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

Good evening sir, I just traveled miles and im looking for some shops information and a place to rest. do you know where i could find those things? 

Character Name: Luna star
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: galaxy like eyes, beautiful smile, white hair, she is skinny, she is 5'5, she is 130 pounds, she wears what elfs normally wear
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sarahbarah

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your powergaming definition is plagiarized - please make sure to write it in your own words! 

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your character cannot know how to make potions 'til this skill is learned in roleplay, so be sure to edit this part of your Personality Traits/Quirks.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

  • Please add a bit more to your Character Biography since it is lacking in some detail!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [sarahbarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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