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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: metagaming is to know to knowledge of something outside of your character`s personal knowledge
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: powergaming is doing something else for other players that wasnt ment for that particlar character
    Status: Denied

The Dark Elf, was raised in a home among his Dark Elf kind in a small village, When he was a small lad of the age of 7 he saw a small group of Guardsman that came from the castle, that was nearby and thought to himself that he would like to be a guard some day so he would train hard and starts small fights among the other children in the village, Than when he was the age of 18 he went to the current Commander of the guardsman and ask him to be Guard among his people but doing so that very night of him being a guard he was being raided from an Orc raiding party that destroyed the village and left him bruised up and cut up and was left alone in the woods in the dark.


Character Name: Jason
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: The Dark Elf is wearing dented and ruined pieces of armor that look like it came from a castle or palace with fresh scars along his face and arms.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Your application has been:

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For the following reasons:

Unfortunately because you are on a guest application I must deny you for simplet things you'd be able to change with a froum account.

Your powergaming definition isn't quite right, feel free to reference our wiki page on power emoting for reference.

You dont reference a specific bit of server lore, this is a requirement, I suggest a birthplace, religion, culture, event that happened he grew up through, etc.

We try to avoid 'x killed my village or family' cliches, please change this as it wouldn't likely happen irp, try to think of something more substantial.

Your three facts seem to be 'im good at x y and z' but it would make for better character development to include a weakness, this isn't a requirement but I suggest it personally.

 

If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI

 

Worry not! This is not the end of the world, and you may re-apply in 3 hours.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!

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