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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: a proto#9122
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming bad
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Dont do it
    Status: Denied

my character was born in the middle of a revolution and my parents got killed when I was very young and know I don't like government and what it does to people, I had friends... but they chose government over me and there family and friends. I had a lover but she died and know I don't want to start one. And no friendships, I just want freedom and no rulers no government or empire ill do my best to keep balance in the world and restore freedom

 

Character Name: Conner
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Government must fall anarchy Must RISE!!
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord crines#2975. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Suicidium to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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