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    Discord: xXKMANOXx#0815
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Restricting the player to do this unreal feats or sanctioning the player
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: promotes the lack of realism in the roles due to the disconnection that is generated when telling or communicating metagaming details
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

 

 

The weary traveler took a seat on the cushion, appreciating the momentary respite from the swampy surroundings. With a deep breath, he began to weave his tale, the story of an exiled former human knight from a distant realm.

"Once, I served as a knight in the service of a noble lord," he began, his voice carrying a hint of melancholy. "My name is Aric, and my life was dedicated to upholding justice and protecting the realm from the encroaching forces of darkness."

The old hag's eyes flickered with recognition, and she leaned in closer, urging him to continue his story.

"But fate can be cruel,"Aric continued, his voice tinged with regret. "During a great conflict that ravaged our land, I found myself ensnared in a treacherous conspiracy orchestrated by a fellow knight, Sir Malachar. He harbored ambitions of seizing power for himself and saw me as an obstacle."

Aric's grip tightened on the cushion as he recounted the events that led to his exile. "Sir Malachar accused me of treason, fabricating evidence to besmirch my name and tarnish my honor. The ruling council, swayed by his deceit, condemned me without a fair trial and stripped me of my knighthood."

"Cast out from the realm I had served faithfully, I became a wanderer, a man adrift without a home," Aric's voice trembled with a mix of anger and sorrow. "I roamed the lands, yearning for a chance to prove my innocence and reclaim my honor. But at every turn, I encountered suspicion and rejection."

The old hag listened intently, her eyes reflecting a blend of empathy and curiosity. She understood the pain of an unjust exile and the yearning for redemption.

"After years of solitary travel, I stumbled upon this murky town," Aric continued, his voice now infused with determination. "Here, amid the swamps and forgotten corners, I found solace and a glimmer of hope for a fresh beginning. The townsfolk embraced me, offering shelter and a chance to rebuild my life."

He met the old hag's gaze, a flicker of hope reigniting within him. "But deep down, I know that my journey is far from over. I must seek the truth and clear my name. I believe there are still those who remember the truth, those who hold the key to unraveling the web of lies that led to my exile."

The old hag nodded, her expression filled with understanding. "Aric, you have faced adversity and borne the weight of injustice upon your shoulders. But remember, the path to redemption is often strewn with obstacles. Seek out those who can aid you on your quest, and never lose sight of your own inner strength."

With those words of wisdom, the old hag leaned back, her aged face etched with compassion and sagacity. "Go forth, Aric, and may the winds of fate guide you towards the truth you seek."

Aric rose to his feet, his resolve rekindled, and bowed respectfully to the old hag. With a grateful smile, he turned and stepped out of the tattered tent, ready to embark on his arduous journey of redemption and vindication.


Character Name: Aric Blackthorne
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: dark hair, brown eyes, tangled and slightly dirty hair, with a lush beard, in a knight's clothing (he stole it from a corpse)
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • It looks like your minecraft name is misspelled or not a Java account! Please provide the corrected username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world by hitting tab or typing in chat!
  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • You can also learn more about combat roleplay here
  1. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states Sir Malachar person is your backstory, are they a player on the server or an npc. If they are a player, please either provide a screenshot of them saying that you can join or them giving the okay for you to use their character in your backstory, Or please give us the contact information so we can double check! 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are well-known, please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story.

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • It looks like your minecraft name is misspelled or not a Java account! Please provide the corrected username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world by hitting tab or typing in chat!
  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • You can also learn more about combat roleplay here
  1. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states Sir Malachar person is your backstory, are they a player on the server or an npc. If they are a player, please either provide a screenshot of them saying that you can join or them giving the okay for you to use their character in your backstory, Or please give us the contact information so we can double check! 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are well-known, please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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