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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: yeetusjesse#2383
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: meta-gaming is using real world info to use in-game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: not playing with your carakter's dis/abbilyties
    Status: Denied

i'm here to explore the world!

but i just took a random boat and here i am!

but i don’t know where i am could you maybe show me around?

my name is Jesse, jesse borendorf and you? *puts hand out*

Character Name: jesse borendorf
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: belt with emerald-like juwel iron sword on the back light elf-armor, green
eyes, white hair, strong but slim, 1,9m, 57kg, pretty fast, good fighter.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

 

→  Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

 

→  Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

 

→ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

https://app.grammarly.com/

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord AnonymousAlexa#3562, and I recommend you join the 

New Player Discord using the following invite: 

→ https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

 

 

 

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