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mirrus1407

By mirrus1407

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: ZekeYaeger#0123
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: being out of character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: being out of unrealistic
    Status: Denied

Hey mister, i am looking for something big that will make me be a hero, i am looking for adventure

Character Name: Yojosuke
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: red hair, beige skin, black eyes and normal size
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src="> 

 

→  Please provide examples of meta-gaming and power-gaming with your definitions.

 

→Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

→Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

→Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

 

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

 

→ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord cobbler#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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