Yokhi

Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

• Bio

  • Your bio is very cliche, with bandits attack kill your father and mother, please change this and make it interesting or plain like he grew up a normal boy etc

  • You also need to include another lore reference other then just travelling oren, you can find this on the wiki of some events and such that have taken place on LOTC

  • Your Bio also has to have a minimum of 10 sentences and I only counted five so please expand on your Bio as well.

• Roleplay Scenario
   

  • Should be a expanded upon this is very bland and doesn't show me anything about how your character acting or anything, please make it a minimum of four sentences. 

• Quirks/Traits

  • Add some positive quirks and traits as well.

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @Cad518#8811, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/