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Athusia
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using information that your character isn't supposed to know.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: controlling another players characters
    Status: Denied

In a town near Krugmar, a young orc boy witnessed his father's death at the age of 8, in his home, and was quickly crowned king, as being the heir to the throne, his whole life he has vowed to find his father's assassin, as well as to conquer the lands of the orcs for himself.


Character Name: Houge Nin'Gar
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 7 foot orc with dark hair, and 2 foot long tusks, with a very heavy muscular build. He has tribal tattoos all over his body, and his head.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

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✦ Possibly give us an example that will complement the definition you have right now.

 

✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Note that your character cannot be a nobility or be a king over a nation. 

 

 

✦ The weakness that you have is rather far-fetched, I'd consider adding another weakness or changing the one you have right now.

 

✦ Your character cannot be a leader of any sort of clan or nation as it is an in character role that needs to be accepted by other players around you.

 

Your application was good but not good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

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Your application has unfortunately been...

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Your time has expired, you may re-apply immediately.  

Please do refer to the other post above for the following changes you need to do before your application can finally be accepted.

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