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YumaDazai


YumaDazai
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    Discord: IHateMySelf.com#8158
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It's basically using info that your character wouldn't have to help yourself in game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It's basically trying to play god, making decisions for others and such.
    Status: Denied

Of Yuan/Salamduel (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/178955-✓-easterners-language-culture-history-religion/) descent, Yuma was born as the only child of 2 common potters. She live a somewhat uneventful life. As a child she often played with a little human girl in the village. But as she grew older, her parents decided that it would be better to move to The Kingdom of Renelia-Gladewynn  to be around other Dark Elves. Though they moved when she was 5, they still wear the fashion of the Yuan/Salamduel, honoring their Easterner roots. Yuma and her parents were always very close, never keeping anything from each other. Her parents were very strict, wanting her to learn the arts of their culture and wanting her to become a master potter like them. They schooled her themselves, teaching her all of the arts. Though her parents wanted her to be as potter, she took an interest in literature more. She enjoyed creating her own stories and seeing characters she created come to life. She was also trilingual, speaking the common,  elven, and Salamduel-Eo. As she began to reach adulthood, her parents wanted her to focus more on getting married, and start her own family. But she felt that she wasn’t ready for that, wanting to explore the world and find her place in it. Her parents reluctantly agreed, for Yuma said she will look for marriage after she returned. She is now 24, looking for adventure, writing along the way.

 

 

 

I would like to say that I wrote this with consistently referencing the wiki and making sure to add parts of lore and stay within what was normal for dark elves with putting my own twist to it. 

 


Character Name: Yuma
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Pale blue hair (WIKI SAYS PALE BLUE). 5'8". Light blue eyes. Very slim, not very muscular. 120 lb. Wears a Kimono in reference to eastern heritage.
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

Yuma looked at the gentleman for a second, thinking of her response. She slowly began to speak. “Hello good sir. My name is Yuma. I come to explore the world, sharing my works of literature along the way.” She sighed finishing. She then showed the kind man a slight smile. 

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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

→ I suggest you read server lore and come back and reapply. Your application was nice, but it lacked a lot of basic definitions. Dark elves are not white, and they also don’t have blue hair.

Take a look at the wiki and reapply if you want to play a dark elf

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Epistile#4565, and I recommend you join the 

New Player Discord using the following invite: 

https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

 

 

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