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By Zanzar

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: Zanzar #8603
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Having your character know things it shouldn't because you know it outside of roleplay
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: having an overpowered character or scenario espersely were it would affect other characters/players
    Status: Denied

Thank you, it is a lovely city, i'm just here for a place to stay and get more resources maybe even meet some new nice people... hopefully meet some nice people

Character Name: Zanaya Ringa
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A Quite simple brown dress with orange trim, a green shoulder cape, green hair, amber eyes, about 5,6 tall, she doesn't look strong but also not weak
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Oh_Ontario

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Character Biography did not have enough lore references. Please include at least 1 lore references and 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT)

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
     

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards as well as it does not match your physical description. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • (you may also edit them so that they fit your description better)

    https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home
     

     

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response does not show you know how to rp, please include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

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Oh_Ontario

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Character Biography did not have enough lore references. Please include at least 1 lore references and 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT)

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
     

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards as well as it does not match your physical description. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • (you may also edit them so that they fit your description better)

    https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home
     

     

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response does not show you know how to rp, please include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

     

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed! 
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    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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