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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: The act of using information gained from out-of-character, in-character.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: The act of controlling, or attempting to control another character. It can also be something like making your character invincible for example.
    Status: Denied

Luthais had been living alongside his family in a rather small town, located around the city of Frostfall -up until the foreseen, yet unavoidable day came; orcs had stormed their beloved settlement. They burnt down everything that they could possibly seem to grasp, including his family's house. All of the townsfolk were slaughtered that day except for Luthais; that's what had been told in bystanders and wanderer's stories. However, no one knows for certain who managed survived the bloodbath caused by the orcs that day.

He can't but to feel enormous guilt for what happened that day - "an unaware child shouldn't be held responsible for such acts of pure evil". Although this is what brought him the courage and will to become a master in both archery and swordplay that he now had become after more than hundred years of training and battle experience.


Character Name: Luthais Adhice
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 180
Physical Description: He stands 6'1ft tall in a straight body posture, form is slim but athletic; they are clearly highly trained physically, perhaps due marksmanship.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Unfortunately you’ve failed to meet the needed requirements for your application.

 

Your Application has been denied for the following reason(s):

  • Definitions | Although your definitions aren't incorrect, I'd like you to elaborate further on what you've already written. Perhaps provide an example or two really explain what metagaming and powergaming really is. Here are some links to help you out!: power-emoting and metagaming.

 

  • Age | As stated in your biography, Luthais had lived in Frostfall in Anthos, which ended in the year of 1457, which is the oldest realm of them all. The current year is 1657. With that being said, your persona would be at least 200 years of age to have experienced that. Please either adjust your biography or update your age and you should be good to go!

 

 

Do not fear, this simply means the corrections were not made to the application or were not fully met. As always, if you have any further questions or need assistance, make sure to send a message through the forums. Please take your time to correct and improve your application before re-applying to LoTC in 6 hours, as we will only review up to 5 applications in the calendar month. If you would like to contact me, you can message me directly on the forums on discord at MrMineLoveDude#1404. Good Luck!

 

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