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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: zeron#5860
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Knowing something out of charater and useing it in charater
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: being op is exsaple having a move that is all ways hit
    Status: Denied

i am bad at typing bc english isint my main language


Character Name: vector
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: wellfit 6.5 in height wheight 145lb blue eyes wears a butler outfit
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your character's Fear should include a reason why they are scared of bottomless pits.

  • What your character likes about themselves should be elaborated on a little more. It should include a reason why they like that about themselves.

  • What your character dislikes about themselves should be elaborated on a little more. It should include a reason why they dislike that about themselves.

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  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ HypedAngel#2020]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message HypedAngel to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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