zombiedave101

Carson · July 17, 2021

Changed Status to Denied

You are free to reapply at any time after having fixed the following issues!

Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
Your Personality Traits/Quirks must be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there.
Your Character Fear must be a fear that is unique to them-- for example, everyone is afraid of death.
Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
Please fix all grammar, spelling, capitalization, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/

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