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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    Discord: ZOMBIEX_HD#3544
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Just logging and doing nothin of value
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: opposite of meta gaming
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario. I com in adventure and to claim what is mine

Character Name: Sigurd Elof
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Buff Wheres long coat brown hair blue eyes
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

→Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

→Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

→ Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action. 

→ Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

→Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord madythenothacked#1187. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

 

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