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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Making a character gody/ridiculously overpowered focusing only on how strong you can be rather than focusing on how impactful can you be. Harming the story and expiriance of others.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Its abuse of information you as a character should not have using it to your advantage. If a friend calls me online to get readdy for a war bc he saw a chat of an enemy player in dc thats metagaming. that doesnt mean i cant log in but i should at least pretend i dont know about it and act like nothing is happening.
    Status: Denied

Torben was born and raised in the city of Varhelm in a harsh, mountainous environment. He grew up in a modest home alongside his parents and two older brothers Herleif and Thorkel, all of whom were deeply devoted to the Red Faith. From a young age, his father taught him the value of hard labor and the stoicism required to survive the freezing northern climate. When Torben was fifteen, a local band of ruffians raided their family's small tavern on the outskirts of the city, claiming the lives of his parents and scattering his brothers. Forced to flee the ruined home into the freezing wilderness, he resolved to live up to the ancient meaning of his name, which translates to "thunder bear" and represents untamed strength and resilience.


Character Name: Torben
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: He has thick, black hair that falls to his shoulders and piercing blue eyes approximately 185 cm and around 80 kg
Roleplay Scenario:

The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: Torben slowly pulls out the offered chair and takes a seat near the glowing embers of the fire. He runs a calloused hand through his thick black hair, his piercing blue eyes locked onto the old woman's withered face. "I come from the cold streets of Varhelm in the Kingdom of Norland, where a local gang destroyed my family's tavern and took everything from me," he states, keeping his tone calm but firm. He leans forward slightly, resting his elbows on his knees. "Since that day, I swore to use my strength not only to seek justice, but to shield the helpless and the less fortunate from the same cruelty I endured." He speaks with a steady voice, showing no fear despite the eerie atmosphere of the shack. "I am ready to pledge my blade to the service of this realm, and to stand as a protector for those who have been cast aside."

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

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