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Nieven
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: burnt.soup
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I ask myself "Is it realistic that my character can do this, or force this outcome?" and remind myself that minecraft rp is collaborative storytelling, and I wouldn't like it very much either if someone forced some outcome on my character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: I ask myself "Would my character know that?" and "What would my character do if they didn't know that" and then act upon that
    Status: Accepted

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


"Oh, I..." Something compels Nieven to tell her. "I wanted to see the world. See other races, experience adventures, so I ran away from home. I hope I can return as a successful adventurer and not get laughed at by the others" She says, her voice quiet and unsure and her eyes darting around the room, never quite fixating on the hag's eyes. "You see, I was made fun of for not wanting to stay there. It was boring anyway, but I want to at least see some of the world before I return to that life" Nieven sighs as she notices her rambling. "I'm sorry, I always get told I talk too much. Or to little. Funny how both is a problem for me" She laughs awkwardly.


Character Name: Nieven Valcaryn
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: green eyes, short reddish brown hair, green coat, brown vest, 6 foot tall, 150 lb
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

Your descriptions of Powergaming and Metagaming are a tad vague, try adding some more detail to it. Here is the page on both topics if you need help with their definitions: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

Please make sure your character sample/backstory has at least seven sentences! If English is not your first language, I would recommend utilizing websites like Grammarly to help ensure punctuation is correct.

Please make sure you use the Third person perspective, not the first person! For example, instead of saying "Something compels me to tell her", try "Something compels Nieven to tell her."

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is ragnarakajavvy! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @Javert!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here: https://discord.gg/lotc

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pinging @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

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