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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is basically using real life information to profit in roleplay situations , some examples are using knowledge of the server's wiki that your character dont know or using discord to arrange planned situations that can affect the rp experience
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: powergaming means playing the game in order to always win, like actions that do not give an opponent an opportunity to react , basically actions like ´´ Kry attacks Steve with his sword , killing him instantly due to Kry's incredible magic sword that can
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Example: (delete this) 

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

Character Name: Heh
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: Heh
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SoulReapingWolf

Changed Status to Under Review

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

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For the following reasons,

 

  • Your definitions on Metagaming & Powergaming fine, however, I suggest using examples to show understanding of the concepts. The following link can help you out.
  • Your Biography a bit short I’d suggest making it a bit longer, with at least a couple more complete sentences (7) and including at least ONE more lore mentions. The following links can help you with the latter. This is a space for you to write the origin/history of your character.
  • I suggest expanding your description a bit, how do his features look like? How is he usually dressed? 
  • Regarding your skin, we are discussing if it’s appropriate or not, I’ll let you know as soon as it’s been decided. 
  • Your interesting facts should be complete sentences and follow the following format
    • Positive (strength, skill, achievement)
    • neutral (likes, dislikes hobbies)
    • negative (Fears, flaws, weakness)

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

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SoulReapingWolf

I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

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But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

You’ve reached your time limit.

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application.

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.

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