lukepne

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

For reasons such as:

Ø Your powergaming definition and your metagaming definition are very vague and do not convey the full meaning, expand them in your own words to properly show you know what you’re talking about. You can review our wiki page about them here!  

Ø  Your biography lacked two sufficient lore references (Settlement names, creature names (creatures that are unique to LOTC not your generic dragon or trolls), other major events that are explained in depth), however races, and continents, nations names and vaguely conveyed facts are not sufficient lore reasons. Make sure these match up with your age and the current server year of 1807. Some places you can look for references are, you can also PM on disc and I can help find more than the listed here:

• Holy Oren Empire

• Hanseti-Ruska

• Providence

• Human Sub Forum  (You can find a bunch of events here).

• Humans

• Norland

Ø Your Biography must be 10 full well-made sentences long, and currently it is too short. Please change this in your further revisions, thank you!

Ø Please expand on your fear - Perhaps add abit more detail as to why your character is like that way

Ø You require to thoroughly explain your character's likes and dislikes about themselves. Please expand this to include proper reasoning "Why" this is a thing they like about themself. Ditto for the dislikes.

Ø Your RP scenario response must be four sentences long and include an action . Please fix this in your next revision, thank you.

Ø Heads up - Potions, aka alchemy is not a skill you can start off with. And requires to be taught irply after you're accepted, as it's something non-mundane.

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide here will also help you

 You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

Your application has been

 

Due to:  24 hours are up

If you believe this was denied by mistake contact me through the information below. You may make a new application whenever.

  

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Evonpire#0044), my forum account, or on the server (Evonpire). You can join our discord.  You can also check out our New Player guide.