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Jhaan

By Jhaan

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: lars.ml
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I allow for the other player to participate in the roleplay instead of taking the lead
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: I keep roleplay related conversations outside of other communication.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

*I study my surroundings before looking back at the hag* "Me?.. What do you mean?" I say as I take a few steps forward. The hag stays silent and stares at me with dead eyes. "I came here because I got lost in the mist, it's as if it led me here.. *I stop to think, and look back at the Hag, who starts slowly laughing as mist covers the tent*

Character Name: Jhaan Umeo
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Skinny build (50kg) brown long hair tied in a knot. Blue eyes, long narrow nose and skinny lips. 1.90m tall with a white cotton shirt, brown pants.
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Javert

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

Your descriptions of powergaming and metagaming are a little vague, make sure you add more detail to them! Here are the pages if you need help with defining them: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

Your roleplay sample is a little short, make sure it is at least Seven sentences long! Also, make sure you only roleplay for your own character, and not the actions of the crone herself!

Your roleplay sample must be in the third person, not the third person! For example, instead of saying "I study my surroundings", try using "Jhaan studies his surroundings."

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is ragnarakajavvy! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @Javert!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here: https://discord.gg/lotc

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pinging @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

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Javert

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

Your definitions of Metagaming and Powergaming are vague, make sure you fully understand and define them!

Your physical description is too vague, you must add more detail to it!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is ragnarakajavvy! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @Javert.

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! https://discord.gg/lotc

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Special:RecentChanges

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