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  1. 14 minutes ago, Luciloo said:

    Seems neat, although in a number of instances you use "it's" where you should be using "its". "It" doesn't have a possessive appostrophe, and "it's" means "it is." My only nitpick, hope it passes.

    I'll look over this and correct some grammar. One too many 5am writing sessions seems to have gotten to me. Ty for bringing this to my attention!!!

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    Amidst crazed cackles and unhinged mania were objects tossed and glasses smashed, a pure anticipation ravaging an often dull mind, bringing to fruition the obscenities of one's most buried thoughts - until once more that mind's bearer could tame their composure. That invitation, one of a threatening dissonance which it's writer oft bears, it rang gleefully in the advertence of that freak it were addressed to - as if permission to let go, to let those desires run true  - to let the monster out.

     

    A voice, long tortured wailed out in beg for rest. To spare this soul a wrath which they'd witnessed with possessed eyes, time and time again... But those screams had long since died to the one mind whom stole their voice.

     

    There were little able to stall this now, a call had been made to one whom just ached for the excuse.


    "Fine, then - fine then. With your viscera I will dye my hand red, by my claw will your mind grow pale... Oh, the years I've awaited such reckless abandonment- for this boy to finally snap."

     

    These words were but a few that rang out for hours in that thing's vicinity, ramblings driven by the obscenities of that corrupted mind. He could assume his call would be heeded, someday... But on that day, could he really expect that thing to follow their rules?

  3. A sickening grin perked upon the pale maw of one certain character, digits clawing at the tools and equipment of a space often unoccupied. Following a maddened wheeze came unintelligible mutters which spat from their lips, gaunt cheeks tensed as that glow were almost lost in their squint.

     

    And so, they got to work.

  4. MC Name:

             MangoManMini

     

    Character's Name:

             Glass

     

    Character's Age:

             40

     

    What feat(s) will you be learning?

             Sorvian Sculpting

     

    Teacher's MC Name:

             teawithbee

     

    Teacher's RP Name:

             Jol

     

    Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:

             Yup

     

    Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             Nope

     

    Are you aware that if this feat is undergoing an activity trial and fails said trial, that you will lose the feat? And that if it is apart of the Lore Games, it might drastically change soon?:

             Im aware

     

  5. MC Name: MangoManMini

    Character's Name: Glass

    Character's Age: 1 Month (Newly Created)

     

    Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

             N/A

     

    Transformed form:

             Sorvian

     

    Creator's MC Name:

             TimberBuff

     

    Creator's RP Name:

             Ciliren

     

    Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

             

    Today’s Sorvians aren’t like Sorvians of old. Created differently, merely an imitation of what was, modern Sorvians are more of an attempt at recreation of the past, when one talented individual discovered their long-lost existence. Now after their efforts, these husks wander Arcas not only following their creator’s desires, but their own aswell. An obedient creation with will of it’s own; that is today’s Sorvians.

     

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    (Mild example of what a Sorvian may resemble. Mine, in particular.)

     

    Backstory

    Sorvians were once a common construct sometimes known as ‘flesh golems’. These golems had no minds of their own, only soul they’d been gifted by their creator. Yet, remarkably, these constructs found themselves with a will and personality of their own, being perhaps close to if not fully considered a living being. Since then, the flesh golems had faded out, the craft of their creation being lost to ages, and the last true sorvians dying out.

     

    Until one individual discovered the history of, the creation of, and the purpose of these ‘flesh golems’. Through relentless trial and error, aswell as countless hours of research, they managed to create the first of today’s ‘Sorvians’, through an elegant model of a human body, crafted with hardened clay and structured with wooden bones. Whilst they still number few, the reintroduction of this race is surely something now set in stone, the teachings of how to make these beings now spread.

     

    Biology

    The biology of Sorvians is alien in the way that you wouldn’t think it should be able to live. Rather basic; it’s smooth flesh molded from clay and skeleton crafted with wooden bones, giving them only the essential movement they need, not the cosmetic. This leaves their faces, ‘masks’, unmoving, perhaps appearing rather creepy to one with a light-heart. A downside of this existence is the rather weak structure of their bodies compared to flesh and bone. Whilst they operate the same, sometimes even better as stamina serves Sorvians no issue, clay bodies and wooden bones can’t withstand damage nearly as much as your usual body structure. However, a Sorvian can take wounds which would render any living thing dead, and still continue.

     

    There are three main ways to kill a Sorvian:

    1. Destroy the mask. The mask of a Sorvian is an essential part of it’s biology, and with three emotes demonstrating solid hits to the mask, the mask can be cracked, and ultimately kill the Sorvian.
    2. Puncture the chest. The chest cavity of a Sorvian is what holds the soul which is given to them from their creator, allowing them sentience. If the chest is punctured, soul will slowly seep out unless clogged back up.
    3. Decapitation. Likely the most effective method, decapitating a Sorvian nearly instantly kills the construct, and is much easier to perform due to their bodily structure.

    Whilst these methods will kill a Sorvian, there is no true way to permenantly kill a Sorvian. Anyone who knows how to make Sorvians can repair their bodies and bring them back, though that Sorvian will still retain loyalty to their original creator.

     

    Aswell as these features, Sorvians do not age. Whilst their body can decay and wither to time, their mind does not, and replacement/repairs of the body can be done throughout their lifetime.

     

    Mentality

    Sorvians are created as servants to whoever created them, though are not simple mindless slaves. Sorvians have their own wonders and will, an imagination and the ability to desire, like any other Descendant. Whilst bound by their orders, Sorvians when allowed by their creators can do anything any usual person may do; explore, talk, learn, teach, train... Live. Sorvians tend to be simple in nature, driven mostly by the ideals they have been taught, rather than the many many conflicting reasons that normal Descendants may have for their actions. 

     

    Abilities

    Sorvians have a few unique abilities that other races do not...

     

    Ageless Bodies: Sorvians, as mentioned earlier, do not physically age, but can show signs of wither and decay such as scars, or gashes. They aswell, cannot heal naturally, and whenever they are injured they must seek repairs to get them resolved.

     

    Super-human Pain Tolerance: A big advantage Sorvians have in combat is their remarkable pain tolerance, feeling pain much less than any other race that does. The difference, is that their pain lasts until whatever injury causes it is repaired. Subtle, but long-lasting.

     

    Other features

    - Sorvians do not have souls, only borrowed whispers of such from their Creators. As such, they cannot learn any magics requiring a soul.

     

    - Sorvians cannot eat, drink, or breath like others can, nor do they need to.

     

    - A Sorvian CAN actually learn to sculpt their own kind, but can only create one every 3 months, compared to Descendants who can make more.

     

    - Whilst Sorvians are built 3-6ft in height, their relatives ‘Newts’ are built 2-3ft in height, being smaller versions. And smaller than Newts, NPC Newts can be created, being anywhere from 1-2ft high.

     

    - Sorvians, perhaps tragically, cannot go against the orders of their creator, even if they disagree with their orders. There is only a single exception to this – the protection of their mask. If their mask is ever put in danger, either by their creator’s orders or actions, a Sorvian will resist.

     

     

     

     

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             Nope

     

    Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Sure

     

    Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:

             Yep

     

    Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

             I understand

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             Nope

  6. MC Name: MangoManMini

     

    Character's Name: Ayo

     

    Character's Age: ?

     

    Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

             Elf

     

    Transformed form:

             Epiphyte

     

    Creator's MC Name:

             N/A

     

    Creator's RP Name:

             N/A

     

     

    Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

     

    Creature lore:

    Whilst rare, there is a somewhat obscure phenomenon which occurs once in a blue moon. A single seed or spore sometimes slips through any of the few existing fae rings – a seed of no usual nature. If one such seed  manages to grow in the mortal realm, it’ll appear nothing special, likely blending in to your usual plant-life, only perhaps separable by a professional botanist. There is however, another way these can be discerned from other plants; Their unique way of spreading.

     

    Similar to how dryads described their conception, plants grown from the origins of the fae-realm will call to those around them to approach them. On the rare occasion that someone both falls for this, and decides to sleep nearby it, the plant will spread its offspring, cocooning around the creature and morphing its being into a plant-based thing. Flesh will be replaced with the fibre of plants, and hair may be replaced with leaves of grass. Sometimes even fungi can be formed. This creates what are known as the Epiphytes.

     

    Characteristics of the one subjected to this transformation should fundamentally remain the same as their prior; height, weight, race characteristics and general looks all remaining some-what intact. Only that their flesh, bones, and organs are all now made of the same plant throughout their body. Despite this massive difference, the Epiphytes function mainly the same way as your usual person, being able to move and speak and breath and feel mostly the same as anyone else.

     

    A unique event in a Epiphyte’s life occurs once every 50 to 100 years, referred to as a ‘rebirth’. In a way, they’ll die, then be reborn as an infant. Whilst they will only take about a year to regrow back to their full adult form, for this brief moment, they are the equivalent of a child. Epiphytes retain the usual life-span of their previous race, so one who was once an elf will go through this several times, whilst someone previously a human would probably only experience this process once.

     

    There are many other smaller features of Epiphytes, but since they aren’t as significant, i see it fit to just list them off;

    • Epiphytes are often herbivore, though depending on the plant they originate from, they CAN be carnivorous. Sunlight is also required for these plants, unless they’re of the fungi variety.
    • Epiphytes are connected to the fae-plant they come from, to such a point that if such plant is harmed, or ill, the Epiphyte will experience those symptoms too.
    • Epiphytes emit a noticeable amount of fae-energy around their being simply as a natural aura. In a single Epiphyte, this can only really be felt by a druid. Though, if multiple Epiphytes group up, the auras gather to emit a larger bubble, said to be what it feels like to stand in the Fae realm itself.
    • Epiphytes struggle against blight more than other races; as when either their origin plant is infected, so is the Epiphyte, and vise versa. Epiphytes infected with blight have been known to go into a craze until such is cured, perhaps even going rabid.
    • Epiphytes can learn all magics with the exception of voidal magics, as it rots away at their bodies.

     


     

    Persona lore:

             

    Ayo likes to explore.

     

    For the years and years he’s lived and not counted, he’s wandered around the continent seeing everything there is to see! He knows the majority of animals, plants and natural phenomenon that exist in these lands, and his mask’s painted eyes only scan for more. Attuned to nature, Ayo is more comfortable with the wild than he is with people, as he’s spent much more time in the midst of the out-lands. Hence, he often sleeps outside, in his big wide home. Bushes, trees and caves are all favourites of his, nestled in by his mother nature. Ayo, for as long as he can remember, has a natural way with the creatures of the wilds. He has no issue approaching what many may deem rather dangerous, and some creatures even scurry around in pursuit of him! But why? Well, Ayo had concluded because they are his friends, ofcourse!

     

    Though, there is a much deeper truth to his attunement with creatures, and nature. One that due to his circumstances, he can only now, in the present day, begin to decipher.

     

    Hard for those who know him to imagine, there was a time where Ayo didn’t wear his mask. When he was a young child, just like any other. Though one day, through his exploration-loving soul he’d found himself lost in the wilds, away from those he once remembered as parents. Lost and alone, it was the first night, of many nights to come, which he spent sleeping amidst the wilds.

     

    The next time he awoke, it were in an oversized green cloak, with a mask attached to his face, and no memory of anything prior. That day is when the Ayo known today was born, and to his knowledge, straight from the ground itself. He’d assumed the mask to be his face, and assumed the cloak to be his body – it were simply how he existed. 

     

    That’s how Ayo knows it, nothing more than his birth from mother nature herself. Anyone else however, would see the lack of sense, the fact that this can't be true. Hidden from Ayo’s knowledge, his young self had been lured in by the powers of a plant from the Fae realm, sleeping beside it as the only comfort he’d had in that dark forest. Then forming around his body, the Fae organism twisted and morphed his being into young plant-fibre. Proceeding the process the vine cocoon receded, stealing his memories, and leaving the new young Epiphyte to rest upon the now matching grass. 

     

    The mask and cloak though? That is rather unexplained. Perhaps it were a person who’d subjected him to the outfit he thinks is his body, in an attempt only to protect his now alien figure from those who would reject him. Perhaps he’d created it himself, and lost all memory of it, just as he had his past infant life. Perhaps it were somehow the work of the Fae, and their many unpredictable ways. It is a mystery likely never to be explained.

     

    Having wandered the world for his entire life, believing the mask to be his face and the cloak to be his body, only recently had Ayo discovered otherwise. Through a painstaking endeavour, he’d had the mask removed. The people-friends he’d made along the way had many speculations. Perhaps he was an elf, explaining his lack of ageing? Perhaps he was a ghost, without even realising it? Perhaps even an orc! Who knew? Well, now only Ayo. As Ayo couldn’t call himself ‘just Ayo’ any longer, lowering the mask to see his plant-formed head, with two metallic horn-like prongs jutting out of his forehead - once attaching the mask to his head, staring back at him in the mirror. He hadn’t known what to expect, really. For the longest time, he’d thought his face were the very mask he held in his hands now. But this were still surprising. He’d never seen anything like it...

     

    With uncertainty of his being, and of how those he’d befriended would react, he dons the mask once more, returning back to his endless adventures.

     

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             Nope

     

    Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Ofcourse

     

    Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:

             Yep

     

    Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

             I understand

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             I have not.

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