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Twandhi

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    As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

     

    Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

     

    • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
    • Metagaming & Powergaming - Lord of the Craft

     

    • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc.

     

    • Your Character Biography mentions that both of your parents die, and that this spurs your character on to become a merciless killer. This is very cliche, and is not a good narrative to drive for roleplay. When making a biography, please try to be unique, and think of a good story-telling backstory. For example, you could say that your parents were mugged instead of killed, and this made you have a fear of mercenaries, or ruffians.

     

    • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks. 
    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit off. Make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action.
    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

     
     

    • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

     

     

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     


     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Twandhi

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @Twandhi#6986

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

     

  2. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hello! As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server. So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Twandhi

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @Twandhi#6986

     

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

     

     

     



     

    If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

     

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

     

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

  3. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hello! As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server. So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Twandhi

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @Twandhi#6986

     

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

     

     

     



     

    If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

     

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

     

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

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    Hello! As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server. So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Twandhi

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @Twandhi#6986

     

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

     

     

     



     

    If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

     

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

     

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Character Fear Response
    • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

    • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits. 

     

    • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

    • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks. 
    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit off. Make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action.

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!


     

     



     

    Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Twandhi

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @Twandhi#6986

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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    Hello! As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server. So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message YOUR USERNAME

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ YOUR DISCORD

     

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

     

     

     



     

    If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

     

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

     

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!


     

     



     

    Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Twandhi

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @Twandhi#6986

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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    Hello! As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server. So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message YOUR USERNAME

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ YOUR DISCORD

     

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

     

     

     


  9. Changed Status to Pending

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    I highly recommend shooting me a DM on Discord so we can go over the application seeing as you are putting in the effort but aren't quite there yet!
    Twandhi#6986

     

    • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
    • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

                 Almaris - Lord of the Craft
                 Races - Lord of the Craft 
              Nations & Major Charters - Lord of the Craft 
     

    • Your Character Biography mentions that both of your parents die, and that this spurs your character on to become a merciless killer. This is very cliche, and is not a good narrative to drive for roleplay. When making a biography, please try to be unique, and think of a good story-telling backstory. For example, you could say that your parents were mugged instead of killed, and this made you have a fear of mercenaries, or ruffians.
       
    • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks. 
       
    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit off. Make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action.
       
    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!
       
    • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

    • Grammarly

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!


     

     



     

    Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Twandhi

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @Twandhi#6986

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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    As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

     

    Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

     

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     


     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Twandhi

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @Twandhi#6986

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.


     

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