Thanks for the review.
I did the following changes:
This:
Has brown hairs and blue eyes, which are typical for heartlanders. Very strong even though he is just 5'5" height.
Replaced by:
Has brown hairs and blue eyes, which are typical for heartlanders. Just 5'5" height but wide at the shoulders.
This:
Haven't magic abilities
Replaced by:
Lack of ambition
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