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✿You’re On the right track!  This is an excellent start I just need you to tweak one tiny little thing and your all set to explore and build your character!

✿Your Character description says he is “very strong”; I would negate saying that and perhaps say he is muscular, cause he may be strong, but it doesn't describe what he appears as.

✿Your interesting facts are a bit off; You still need a Negative fact about your character. No character starts with magical ability, so by default, your negative fact is a bit off. Try to think of something more To balance out and create a unique character to roleplay with! If you cant, think of anything, don't worry! Look at some of these negative traits!

https://gyazo.com/c106b378e72efb2b8eb877cfa5451744

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Thanks for the review.

I did the following changes:

This:

Has brown hairs and blue eyes, which are typical for heartlanders. Very strong even though he is just 5'5" height.

Replaced by:

Has brown hairs and blue eyes, which are typical for heartlanders. Just 5'5" height but wide at the shoulders.

This:

Haven't magic abilities

Replaced by:

Lack of ambition

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