Puglord

“It flew without it's heads, I watched it turn as we sailed off. I don't like that one bit” Exclaimed a dwarven scholar from a clinic. Mists of a shamans blessing healing his wounds as he spoke of the fight, quite happy he managed to get a cannon off at yet another massive beast even if he did not cause it to fall

An armoured figure skirted the edge of the new hollow “Too late... It wasn't buried, the entrance simply changed. I now see why they were so afraid all those years ago. Too late to break in and close it correctly” The man spoke out somberly, his constantly failing memory piecing together what he could about that fateful day when he found that very tear with a few others

MC Name: Hawkeye__Gough

Character's Name: Alviss

Character's Race: Dark dwarf

What magic(s) will you be learning?

         Animism [Fire]

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What altar did you learn this magic from?

         None, but ColonelGaea is the farseer who brought me to the realm

MC names of ST who oversaw your event and whoever accompanied you:

         none, but the spirit name is Daakyazif

Offer an explanation of the magic(s) you are learning:

Animism, the return of elemental spirits and their influence on this realm. after making a pact with a lesser, as the greater elementals simply won't bother with you. A deal is made, the shaman getting powers and drawbacks related to the spirit in exchange for the spirit being worshipped and following the tenants of the pact. 

Provide evidence (screenshots) you've interacted with an approved altar with ST supervision:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NXKmNebbss4UgwCVy3SRct_I05ksyQUk5P2l1GwWzj8/edit?usp=sharing

[google document with all the screenshots]

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         yes, all void magics [Forgot if i said i dropped them all a while ago.]

Do you agree to keep the ST updated on the status of your STMA?:

         yes

Have you applied for this magic on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         no

this is indeed a glorious moment

“Shame I won’t be able to get knowledge from it. A dragon that speaks common is rare” A sleepy dark dwarf mumbled as he stared at his own sketch of the massive eye before falling asleep at his desk

The dwarf, who had stolen the dropped staff in a moment of greed watched the execution, handing it off to Luthriel as he realised they were better off having it compared to him, as it was provably the only thing that was now around to remind them of their fallen friend

The lone visitor from the time Elias in serheim who found an odd comfort in the aging paladin, remaining in their cell for a good chunk of the captured’s time they paused at the news of the passing. The aging specters' memory failing him for a while as he tries to recall the oddly familiar name. Time passed in the dark tavern they sat in before he finally gave up. the name Glordhel being the name of the man who passed but Hermit still longed to met Elias again on better terms, and not with one bound In chains as the other sat in the cell, but he somehow felt that that day would never come. The one paladin that the ghost would speak to as people, and not as someone who would hunt him on sight was now gone to join Xan in their afterlife.

“… religion” grumbled a confused dark dwarf

[!] a random dwarf scholar stared at the missive, pondering on if he should write about the siege and his experience in it and claim that mina.

pog material for my ghost to work with, i would 100% make a bow from this if its accepted [and yes, more fancy wood, give me reason to do wood working ghost rp] +1

A:How often can your ireheart even get in contact with the blue dwarf

B:what was the oddest experience you’ve had. Be it an event that just seemed off or a persona that was 100% on crack 

Valannor, this is a godsend piece of lore. You’ve outdone yourself once again but please. Spikes are needed 

[!] a note reads 'do you do deals in knowledge? if so im willing to barter for something -a'

Alviss stared at the missive, pausing as soon as he read his name as Alviss Moryvan and went to go on a rant to a certain Primarch about why his name was labeled as such, an angry dwarven scream being heard throughout Nor'asath saying

"NETSEEEEEETH"

(edit:) Few minutes later yet another angry roar echoed throughout the city as the dwarf was re-directed to the person who actually wrote the missive

"QUDLIAAAAAAAHHHHHH WHERE IN ANEH GOD OR SPIRITS NAME ARE YE!"

9 minutes ago, rukio said:

Nehtamo Ibarellan cold sweats. "I hope no one calls it Malin'or." His lips thin, a sharp inhale. "I'm worried Earendel will return if they do...the bortu definitely don't want that."  

A wild dark dwarf coughs at a similar time, swearing he heard something before returning to his book*

“…. Ah alreadeh miss norleh, Vandalism… fokkin ‘ell” Grumbled out a dark dwarf

1 hour ago, z3m0s said:

Algrimmor’s eyes lit ablaze with blue voidal light as he began to channel forth his ability.

ah yes, algrimmor, a new dwarven mage

MC Name:

         Hawkeye__Gough

Character's Name:

         Alviss

Character's Age:

         124

What feat(s) will you be learning?

         Alchemy

Teacher's MC Name:

         Sharpstring

Teacher's RP Name:

         Tuzzic mossborn

Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:

         yes

Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         no

Are you aware that if this feat is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

         yes

"Quid si quaestiones non habeo?"

interrogavit pumilionum

Honestly, its an alright idea but i think the way you're doing it is off, Ice is supposed to be learned at T3 and its unclear on if its a T2 or T3 spell, the main text says T2 and the first spoiler says T3, the ice weapon spell breaks that used bump in skill so it becomes more ice evo instead of water evo, bump it up to t3 if you do wish to really implement this. And it can be even clarified that you can pull off ice projectile as such as you're able to shape it later down the line into a dagger for example, and use it that way. 

T5: Two-handed weapons such as great-swords and Warhammers can be made 

AND Dual weapons can be wielded by the Evocationist, the dual weapons cannot be weapons of two-handed ones. (You cannot hold two Warhammers on one.) (Each require 3 emotes.)

This part however, even the t4 version of this spell is iffy at best, as much as it would be nice, its redundant. Scions would be the only branch of mage that would get use out of this and its a t5 spell. Mages are weak physically, its the main voidal drawback. Even if its low density what mage in their right mind would get into melee range of someone? they're alot more effective at a range, So im one to agree with @_Leid, great idea and its nice to see someone trying to do something for water evo, but horrible execution due to the nature of voidal magic.

   Dry ice though is quite nice yet seems op, only things that I think should be clarified is this  Dry Ice projectiles can pierce through armor  as its quite vague, would it pierce full plate? chain mail? what kind of material would it be able to pierce? as of its current state its so vague its able to just be easily powergamed to the point where it can pierce through things like carbarum plate.

and why would you take one of the few water spells and turn it into an ice spell? water blast is THE beginner spell of water evo outside of just being able to conjure water. its supposed to be one of the weaker spells.

[!] A wild dark dwarf found himself in a similar dilemma to Razeil as he read over his letter

An amused groan escaped Alviss as he read the news “Didn’t realize da Irehearts were all so broke, but da hussle ah suppose should beh respected”

Ah yes. This was some great comedy to read this morning

MC Name:

         Hawkeye__Gough

Character's Name:

         Alviss

Character's Age:

         116

What feat(s) will you be learning?

         Voidal artificery

Teacher's MC Name:

         no teacher, those who helped though were Z3m0s and Mirvamand

Teacher's RP Name:

         those who helped were Kalgrimmor and eldi

Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:

         yes

Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         no

Are you aware that if this feat is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

         yes