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Changed Status to Under Review
As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!
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Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
- Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
- Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.
- Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response ties into your Character Biography!
- Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne.
For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400
If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.
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Changed Status to Pending
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
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Unfortunately, given the established lore, your character cannot be related to any King lest given permission from an established king, nor can you create lore such as a kingdom without proper in-game roleplay. LotC has set lore and kingdoms of its own already established. With that being said, your character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
- Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
- Your Personality Traits/Quirks mentions your character's skill for potion making. Please remove this as alchemy requires proper in-game roleplay and a teacher.
- Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.
- Your Roleplay Scenario Response should only include emotes of your own character, being at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!
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Your Skin is not up to LotC standards, the shading is too noisy. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne.
For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400
If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.
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Changed Status to Under Review
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You have an application already submitted and reviewed. Please, click here to visit it.
Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne.
For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400
If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.
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Changed Status to Pending
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
- On LotC, we have our own have our own calendar that coincides with our lord.. Please reference the link below!
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Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne.
For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400
If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Under Review
Hello! As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server. So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!
Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne.
For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400
Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:
If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!
If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.
Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.
Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!
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Changed Status to Under Review
Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
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Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne.
For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400
If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.
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Changed Status to Denied
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Changed Status to Under Review
As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!-
Lord of the Craft is a fantasy server and does not take place in the real world. Instead, the server has its own set of races, nations, creatures, and lore. I urge you to take a look at our wiki and forums. If you need any assistance, please message me either on the forums or add me on discord (minty#8400).
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
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Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks
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Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!
Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne.
For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400
If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.
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Changed Status to Pending
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Changed Status to Under Review
Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
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Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
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Your Character Biography states your persona was born in Altas. Unfortunately, Altas is an old map and your persona is much too young to have experienced it. So instead, please change Atlas to Almaris.
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Additionally, your Character Biography mentions the Empire of Man. Unfortunately, that too was on an old map. The modern equivalent to such would be the Holy Orenian Empire.
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Your Character Biography mentions your persona's parent being a druid. I would remove this. Noting that she cares greatly for the environment, perhaps she can simply be an environmentalist.
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit off. Please only emote for yourself and make sure your response includes one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action.
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne.
For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400
If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.
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Hello- As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!
Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne.
For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400
Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:
If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!
If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.
Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.
Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!
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Hello- As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!
Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne.
For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400
Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:
If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!
If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.
Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.
Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!
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Changed Status to Accepted
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Hello- As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!
Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne.
For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400
Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:
If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!
If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.
Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.
Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!
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Hello- As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!
Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne.
For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400
Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:
If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!
If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.
Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.
Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!
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Changed Status to Denied