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Melpomenne

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  1. Changed Status to Under Review

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    As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

     

    • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

    • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
    • Your Character Biography features a common character trope! Please change that.
    • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 
    • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
    • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.
    • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.
    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action.
    • Your Skin is missing! If you're having problems, you can either paste the screenshot of the skin in the Biography section or you can send it to me over discord. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

     

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     

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    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

  2. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

     

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    Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.


     

  3. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hello- As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

     

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

     

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    If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

     

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

     

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!


     

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    Hello- As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

     

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

     

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    If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

     

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

     

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!


     

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    Hello- As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

     

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

     

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    If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

     

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

     

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

  6. Changed Status to Under Review

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    As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why you’ve been denied. 

     

    • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.

    • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

    • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

    • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

    • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

    • Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action.

     

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     

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    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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    Hello- As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

     

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

     

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    If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

     

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

     

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!


     

  8. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hello- As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

     

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

     

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    If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

     

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

     

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!


     

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    As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why you’ve been denied. 

     

    Low effort. If you wish to try once more, message me and I may guide you through the application process.

     

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after.

     

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    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

  10. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hello- As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

     

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

     

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    If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

     

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

     

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!


     

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    As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why you’ve been denied. 

     

    • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

    • Your Character Biography is missing. Please remember to include 6 sentences.  If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…? You're also missing a lore reference. Please include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks mentions your character being a Roman Catholic. Catholicism does not exist in LotC and it's closest equivalent would be Canonism. I recommend you review the wiki and lore you feel might be relevant for your character.
    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action.

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     

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    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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