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  1. MC Name:

             TheSoupSupreme

     

    Character's Name:

             Ali Al-Jafir

     

    Character's Age:

             Unknown

     

    Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

             Farfolk

     

    Transformed form:

             Revenant

     

    Creator's MC Name:

             N/A

     

    Creator's RP Name:

             N/A

     

    Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

             

    Revenants: A New Undead, just recently brought back, they are unaware of how they died, they are what usually turn into Poltergeist after finding out how they died. Though not as mangled as the Poltergeist, they do have scars resembling their death, usually after a week or two they may turn into a Poltergeist [Up to the Player]. Normally the weakest of the 4 Subtypes of Phantoms, as they have only recently been reborn into this world as a Phantom, also having the most fragile bodies and minds, though seeming to have better regeneration than the Graven (Grey in Appearance)

    Poltergeist: The Worst, and most Unfriendly of the Bunch. Poltergeist have the strongest abilities due to the rage they suffer (At least by Player Standards), or Depression of knowing how they died, and wanting revenge, they also appear rather mangled, worse than how they originally might have looked as a revenant, think of the movie "The Poltergeist" (Red or Black in Appearance)

    Specters: The Most Mellow of the Undead to choose from, they have a calming affect around them, or within any house they may posses, though not as powerful as Cloud Temples Ability to stop attacking, most are usually shy, though there may be the odd, devious Specter, pulling pranks that wouldn't harm you. They would look rather creepy, somewhat like a doll, but thats better than being mangled or having wounds like a Poltergeist or Revenant. Rather Good, or at least peaceful in nature, they like to keep away from being hit by any weapon, especially scared of the pain from Aurum (Blue, White, or Yellow in Appearance)

     

    Gravens: The most obsessive of the Undead that are playable, they wish to fulfill the goal they had not completed in their former life, being for the most part what drives them, other than perhaps obsessing over how they died (Gray, Green, or Purple in Appearance)

     

    If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

    How Ali Al-Jafir would look, in the form of a Revenant:
    The Specter of Ali Al-Jafir would be a Qalasheen Man, with Terracotta Skin. Though wearing a White Turban, with a Scarf/Cloak Akin to that of the Night Sky, A Gray Tank-top under the Cloak/Scarf, with a White Shirt underneath, with a White Cloth acting as a Belt for his Pants, with Brown/Black Pants, along with Brown Shoes... Though due to becoming a Revenant, Ali's Clothes and Skin have been affected by a Gray-ish color, becoming a bit more Gray in color

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             N/A

     

    Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

             N/A

     

    Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:

             Yes

     

    Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

             I Understand

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             N/A

  2. MC Name:

             TheSoupSupreme

     

    Character's Name:

             Ali Al-Jafir

     

    Character's Age:

             Unknown

     

    Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

             Farfolk

     

    Transformed form:

             Specter

     

    Creator's MC Name:

             N/A

     

    Creator's RP Name:

             N/A

     

    Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

             

     

     

    Revenants: A New Undead, just recently brought back, they are unaware of how they died, they are what usually turn into Poltergeist after finding out how they died. Though not as mangled as the Poltergeist, they do have scars resembling their death (Grey in Appearance)

    Poltergeist: The Worst, and most Unfriendly of the Bunch. Poltergeist have the strongest abilities due to the rage they suffer (At least by Player Standards), or Depression of knowing how they died, and wanting revenge, they also appear rather mangled, worse than how they originally might have looked as a revenant, think of the movie "The Poltergeist" (Red or Black in Appearance)

    Specters: 
    The Most Mellow of the Undead to choose from, they have a calming affect around them, or within any house they may posses, though not as powerful as Cloud Temples Ability to stop attacking, most are usually shy, though there may be the odd, devious Specter, pulling pranks that wouldn't harm you. They would look rather creepy, somewhat like a doll, but thats better than being mangled or having wounds like a Poltergeist or Revenant. Rather Good, or at least peaceful in nature, they like to keep away from being hit by any weapon, especially scared of the pain from Aurum (Blue, White, or Yellow in Appearance)

     

    Gravens: The most obsessive of the Undead that are playable, they wish to fulfill the goal they had not completed in their former life, being for the most part what drives them, other than perhaps obsessing over how they died (Gray, Green, or Purple in Appearance)

     

    If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

    As a Specter, one would have the shades of either: Blue, Yellow, or White to appear in, perhaps a mix, though a bit creepier than your average human, its much better than a poltergeist, not having any scares of how they died.

    As for how Ali Al-Jafir would look, in the form of a specter:
    The Specter of Ali Al-Jafir would be a Qalasheen Man, with Terracotta Skin, akin to that of a doll, and Calm Blue Eyes. Though wearing a White Turban, with a Scarf/Cloak Akin to that of the Night Sky, A Gray Tank-top under the Cloak/Scarf, with a White Shirt underneath, with a White Cloth acting as a Belt for his Pants, with Brown/Black Pants, along with Brown Shoes... Though due to becoming a Specter, Ali's Clothes and Skin have been affected by a Blue-ish color, becoming a bit more light blue in color.

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             N/A

     

    Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

             N/A

     

    Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:

             Yes

     

    Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

             I Understand

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             N/A

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